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PostSubject: Kisorgi Rindar! ~dead~   Kisorgi Rindar!   ~dead~ EmptyWed Nov 20, 2013 7:06 am

General Information

Name:Kisorgi Nero Rindar

Age:21

Gender:Male

Background: From a young age, Kisorgi was a bigger fellow. He was 5'6 by 15. He of course was like other ninja in that he trained and trained. Wait! Before I get to far into this, I should explain the reason that he started this ninja business in the first place. Since his father was a bigger man as well, they assumed he would grow to be that size. His parents said he was to be one. He had no real choice, considering everything. So, He started to train at 9. His parents helped him at first. His life was strict for the first while. They knew he had potential, but it became apparent quick that he had anger problems.

Now, Let's skip ahead to when he was 12 in which he entered the academy. He wasn't as good as the rest, besides being tougher and faster because of his training. What was troubling for him, was his inability to do anything with Genjutsu or Ninjutsu. Well, At least according to the teachers. This is why he aimed to improve his Taijutsu instead. When he was 12, he was 5'3. He would win in the obstical courses. This meant he got known around the academy for his Taijutsu.

Skip ahead 2 years, he was 14. 5'5 and still growing. Another boy challenged him to a Taijutsu duel. Well, Since it was unknown for anyone to match him he accepted it. They scheduled the match, and waited for the date to come. The time passed slowly then the match arrived.

They arrived and got into their stances. The two stared each other down. The other boy was smaller, but faster. The two began the match, it was fast paced at first. They barraged each other with strikes, neither backing down. The smaller boy hit him in the ribs, and Kisorgi stumbled back. It was a perfectly placed hit. The boy hit him in the back of the leg, bringing him down to a knee. He got nailed in the gut with A kick, but managed to make his way to his feet through the kicks. He blocked a kick and pushed the kid back. He blocked a few more of the kids punishing blows. He dodged 1 last punch, and fired shot after shot with his fists into the boys stomach. After about 10 hits, Kisorgi stopped and did a spinning roundhouse kick, which was dodged. The boy nailed him with a kick into the back. He felt the kick, but he didn't care. He turned around, hiding the pain. He blocked a kick from the boy, and then nailed the boy with 5 open palmed shots into his gut. He then kneed the boy in the gut.

The boy fell to his knees and smiled. The boy wasn't done quite yet. He dodged what would have been the finishing blow by falling onto his back. The boy hopped up and kicked Kisorgi multiple times in the gut and ribs. They were fast, but didn't hurt as much as they could. Kisorgi was staggered. The boy hopped up and kicked Kisorgi with a spin kick to the side of the face, which knocked him on his arse. The boy aimed another kick at his face once he sat up and it made contact. It broke Kisorgis nose. The blood trickling down from his nose, Kisorgi got up. He wasn't gonna lose. The boy tried to kick him again, but Kisorgi grabbed his leg and spun the boy around. He then nailed the boy in the face with a punch. The boy stumbled back. Kisorgi then swiped the boys leg from under him. The boy fell back, and landed with a thud. Kisorgi backed off and said, "I'm done, He's unable to fight."

"Please, Y-You think I can't fight anymore?" The boy said, getting up.

"Alright, If you want to continue to fight, I will." Kisorgi responded.

The two went at it again, at the same tenacity as before. The traded blows, but Kisorgi slowly got the upper hand. He nailed the boy with another knee in the rib, and the swiped his leg from under him. He followed through as the boy hit the ground, and knocked the boy unconscious with one last punch. He got up, and wiped the blood a bit. "He's done now, He's unconscious."

The curator of the fight walked over and checked if this was true. He did the tests and he was right. He walked over and raised Kisorgi the winner. It was a good moment for Kisorgi, He had finally felt challenged, it felt fantastic. Although, He was hurt. The crowd cheered for him. He sat down and knew he was tired.

Skip to 17, He's in a squad at this point and they are on a mission at this crucial time in his life. He was on a escort mission with his squad. It was to be a normal mission with no complications.


Appearance:He is 6'4 around 160 pounds. He often wears things like a black jacket and pants when wearing his very rare causal clothing. When he wears his training uniform it consists of the ninja tunic, a pair of black pants and boots. His hair is about neck long and black. He has a slight beard that he keeps shaven short so that he won't get grabbed by it.


Personality:His Personality often depends on his mood.

In a happy mood, he can often be talkative. While he is talkative, his mind is racing, from one thing to another. Wether it be food and fights to family and care. Although, Even in a happy mood, when time calls for it, he can easily become foucused and serious. Which is both a good and bad thing depending on how you look at it. Of course, He disregards the smaller things like word cues. But, He keeps his eyes upon whom he speaks to, just in case they draw a weapon or decide to attack.

On the contrary, when he is angry he gets aggressive. He gets hasty. He get's predictable. He also gets loud, and I mean loud. He often stomps around and yells. He's always had anger issues. He also never really cares about anyone when he is angry. Only if your life is in danger will he come. I mean truly in danger, like about to die danger. He also tends to get off the bad foot... a lot when he is angry.

When he is scared, which is rare, he often gets shaky. His hands would shake and tremble. He would sometimes manage to keep his voice steady, but if he was scared enough that it threw his voice into studders, you know something went down, or is going down. He also acts in general different. An example is the idea of him laying on a wall, eyes closed and body shaking. If he's like this, people usually try to figure out what the heck's wrong with him.

Whilst in a friendly brawl, he often holds back a tiny bit, or at least never goes for lethal blows. This often hinders him in his friendly brawls, but in a real fight... one for his life, he never holds back. He often seems mad, which he often is when he has to fight for his life. Of course, in a fight for his life, he could become scared, but when in a battle, he hides emotions like being scared. He thinks it bad to show your opponent emotion.

Otherwise, It seems like he often is a knowledgeable person, whom takes everything into consideration, which is bull-crap, as when he is alone, he is often absent-minded unless the village is under attack or is in a war or something like that. He never is unprepared for a fight, but isn't necessarily always ready for a fight. By this I mean that he wouldn't be ready to attack like normal. An example is when he gets comfortable, he can get up and block in time more often then not. Yet, While he can block, he isn't exactly ready to attack.

Specialization (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu)

Majour: Taijutsu- Hard fist

Minour: Ninjutsu-wind

-Chakra Style (Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Lightning) (Only detail if Ninjutsu chosen as a Specialization). Wind which he uses to either take his oponent out of knock them off balance to take them out with his Taijutsu.

History

Village of Residence:Konohagakure

Clan:Rindar


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PostSubject: Re: Kisorgi Rindar! ~dead~   Kisorgi Rindar!   ~dead~ EmptyThu Nov 21, 2013 10:13 pm

Graded Chunin. You have shown Above Average literary competence. Once per week, every Thursday, you may Declare to be tested to advance into a higher rank. Congratulations.
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PostSubject: Re: Kisorgi Rindar! ~dead~   Kisorgi Rindar!   ~dead~ EmptySat Nov 23, 2013 5:12 am

I graded this Genin for two main reasons. A) You asked me to grade this with a blank appearance, you should have checked it over thoroughly before asking me to do so. B) I cannot make exceptions for anyone, or else everyone would just keep fixing their mistakes with no consequence and everybody would be Jonin's.

Next Thursday you'll be able to Declare for Chunin.
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