Illya
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Join date : 2013-12-03
 | | Subject: Illyasviel Tue Dec 03, 2013 2:51 am | |
| Name: Uchiha Illyasviel Age: 18 Gender: Female Background: - Spoiler:
On December 20, a two baby girls would be born within the cool climate of Konohagakure. Born to an elder within the Uchiha clan Kisuke Uchiha, and his common law wife Rei, both seemed to be healthy babies at first glance, but it was soon discovered that one of the babies was infected with a fever upon birth. They tried all they could but the girl could not be saved... she died moments after her birth. The other had lived however and it was decided to call her the combination of both the names they had picked out for the twins. Illyasviel.
Spoiled and pampered. Those two words summarized early life for Illya. Anything she wanted she got it and anything she didn’t need she also received. From early on she was taught the very foundations of her clan. Who her ancestors were and what were they’re achievements. She was quizzed on the history of the clan, even though she was interested in the clan, in reality she wanted to be like a normal kid and have fun with others but it wasn’t to be.
At the age of eight, Illya was enrolled in the Konohagakure academy. As a child in the academy Illya wasn’t popular among the other kids, and normally spent her time alone, watching others play and having fun, suffering in solitude, others didn’t pick on her but just simply ignored her for one reason or another. She worked hard to impress the teachers and other students by always being the top of class, be it theory or practical she was on top, it wasn’t because she was a child prodigy, it was all because she wanted to be accepted. At the end of her academy life she graduated the top of her class, which was expected by the academy instructors but she still hadn’t gained what she originally sought after, instead of recognize her as a peer, they labeled her a know it all and a show off.
At the age of 13 Illya found herself having a thirst power. Being placed in a three man cell with a bunch of no names, Illya easily stood out as the ace of her group. Whether it was doing laundry, or escorting an elderly man through the village she had done it with the best of her abilities. She spent most of her time away from them however as she found it better to train with her father more than waste time with a bunch of clowns. Training with Demetrius proved to be something more than she could handle as he ruthless beaten then young girl time and time again, in the presence of her immediate family and higher ranking clan members. Unable to even move with being mowed down, she decided that enough was enough and it was time to have her revenge. Every morning she would get up before everyone and trained on her own, pushups, sit ups the works. Her own power had grown considerably over the months she spent training and also her confidence grew. She was confident that one day she would be able to show all of konoha the true power of the Uchiha
One day she had openly challenged her father to a duel while in the midst of a clan meeting. While most of the members were horrified of what she had done, the others had labeled it as a gutsy move to win her father’s respect and it worked. Gathered in the training hall, they had witnessed the fruits of her labor as she lasted much longer than anticipated and was even able to wound her father in battle. As a rewarded for her hard work, her father stated that as equals he had no need to hold back during their fights. As a result, Illya received 30 stitches, broken ribs, and a concussion and earned four months in the hospital after being brutally assaulted.
Appearance: Illya is what many would consider a prized possession, for both men and women. Illya is a physically fit woman. She is built like an athlete. There are high degrees of muscle definition that wouldn't be apparent if one views her from a distance. But up close she resembles something similar to the idea of an Amazon. Her legs are more defined than anything else. Her body tends to take an hour glass shape as she has thick hips, a relatively large chest and a really profuse set of other features. Illya’s hair is undoubtedly one of her best features. Though most people mistake it for white, it is actually silver. Her hair nestles on her back and shoulders, and she always wears it straight no matter the occasion, be it a formal setting or on the battlefield. That’s just how she prefers it. It also looks soft to the touch, silken almost. Her hair has a gentle wave to it. Her brow and most of her eyebrow are covered by a front fringe while the sides of her face are framed by shorter strands of her hair. Her eyes are often compared to rubies by others and the sparkling red seems to hold the warmth of a crimson sunset. Long, thick eyelashes that fan across her cheeks when closed, envelop her perfectly almond shaped eyes, making the brightness of the red stand out even more. Her eyes are always twinkling with what seemed like amusement or an inside joke only she gets. Her skin is of a brown complexion and delicate like a flower due to the genes in her family. Personality: Illya is a serious individual who doesn't care for playing around much. She is the type of person who likes things rational and logical. Silly ideas or thoughts do not amuse her nor does she think of them and if given, she will more-likely-then-not give a look of un-approval. She's very confident in herself and her abilities. Coming off as a bit cocky at times but not so much that she doesn't know when she's beat. Illya can also be a bit aggressive at times. She knows what she wants and isn't afraid to push to get it. She's very straight forward and says what's on her mind, not taking in to account the feelings of others. However, she is also very closed off about certain feelings. More personal thoughts that she believes are weak are kept locked away to herself and if accused of having them, she will snap. Denying every word of it. Illya doesn't like being seen as weak as she grew up believing that the weak didn't deserve anything in the world. Anyone who says otherwise will find her quickly stepping into a temper. She has a hard time dealing with feelings of love or caring for another person. Often they get pushed aside or she quickly becomes angered as she doesn't know how to handle them. Specialization (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu) Majour:Ninjutsu Minour: Genjutsu -Chakra Style : Fire Lightning Village of Allegiance: Konoha Clan: Uchiha | |
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| | Subject: Re: Illyasviel Tue Dec 03, 2013 7:21 pm | |
| I'm going to give you the rank of Genin. Genin generally defines your literary capabilities of being average. You retain acceptable grammar, despite a few flaws. Your mastery over the English language is average, and your literary proficiency tends to show the above as average.
Now, on the Thursday of next week, you may Declare to advance to Chunin. For the reference, your problem areas mainly lie within your punctuation, as your phrasing comes to many jarring halts and half-completed thoughts. The use of consistent periods gives the writing somewhat of a cut stature, since it feels as though the sentences have no real meaning other than abstract detail. I would suggest stuffing your face into a thesaurus, as I have many a time. It's a writer's best friend, after all! | |
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